I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Logan I really like how you did not use two many words and keept it siple, mabey next time you could make the picture i bit bigger so nyou could see it
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hay there is nothing but words cloud you put some stuff that you did because that might be cool.(:
ReplyDeleteI like How you had your comets on it.Next time you could do fancy writing. I did that once.
ReplyDeleteHi Logan
ReplyDeleteI really like how you did not use two many words and keept it siple, mabey next time you could make the picture i bit bigger so nyou could see it
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